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Kathleen Clare Waller's avatar

Hauntingly beautiful, Silvio. And that last line!!

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

I knew you'd notice that one, Kate. I just did. Thank you so much!

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Kathleen Clare Waller's avatar

Aha :) well, it’s excellent.

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Rose Campbell's avatar

I couldn’t agree more with Frank Zappa! My philosophy is ‘live & let live’!

Also, I feel that one does not need an audience when speaking! I talk to myself, and I think it’s a matter of self expression, akin to keeping a private journal. Plus, no one plagues you with their efforts to convince you to see things ‘their way’!!

Very enjoyable read, Silvio!

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Glad to see it resonated, Rose! We're totally in sync. Thanks so much!

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Terry Freedman's avatar

I enjoyed this, in a masochistic, letting it wash over me kind of way. The line:

"until I realized that my words were being uttered into a closed line, to no one on the other end"

reminded me of the time I was talking to my then-girlfriend and she started snoring. I should have taken that as a portent of things to come (we made arrangements to meet, and she didn't turn up; I didn't care).

In view of your apparent antagonism to full stops (periods), I believe you will find this course on punctuation useful:

https://www.citylit.ac.uk/courses/workplace-communication-with-digital-skills-english-for-the-office-and-business-intermediate-level-1-level-2

Chortle! 🤣

On a serious note, I really like the concept of diaries interrupted.

" it’ll never happen, not in my lifetime or those waiters’ lifetimes or my kids’ or grandkids’ lifetimes": I disagree.

"illusory superiority": I see this every day in some context or other, in the sense of some people thinking they are superior to others in some regard. One tries to ignore them.

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Thanks so much, Terry! Your comments are always so interesting, and I love how you often share a personal story along with them—this one about your then-girlfriend snoring on the phone almost killed me lol. Also, that course on punctuation? I'm ready to take it! (At my own pace, of course). :)

PS: I hope you're right on the "it'll never happen etc."

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Terry Freedman's avatar

😂

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Jill CampbellMason's avatar

Your cadence is YOU, And frankly, Zappa has a point.

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

He does. I'm a big fan, always have been. Thank you so much, Jill!

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ARC's avatar

Great philosophical prose. Pessimistic though. But yeah you can't change anyone mind. You can coerce them into saying what you want but you can't actually convince them of anything. They convince themselves using their words in the or own voice at best.

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Precisely. Thank you so much!

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Jisoo's avatar

It took me a few lines to realize what “in one gulp of air” meant. That was two BIG gulps of air Silvio haha. It’s like in yoga, where the teacher instructs you to inhale, and when you’re just about to exhale, the teacher says to hold your breath. And you wait, and wait, and wait and wait to be released… and still wait….. It’s a bit too much to hold for that long, a bit dizzying, a bit suffocating, a bit annoying perhaps, because no one can possibly hold their breath for that long, but once you finally let your breath out, you feel the blood circulating again and you feel like your built-up malaise unclogged. There is a reward for the patience :)

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Haha, Jisoo! You're right -- it’s a bit tough to get through them without breathing. But I’m glad to hear the reward for patience (and effort) was worth it. :) Thank you so much!

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Sammie Mack's avatar

So good!!! Loved them both. Favorite bits were: the Frank Zappa quote, “how funny it is when we immediately stop talking the moment we realize no one’s listening” (so true), the description of a ‘relevatory earthquake’. You have a way with your writing! I always find inspiration in you. 💛

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Thank you so much, Sammie! Glad you liked them. :)

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Nathan Slake's avatar

Having been engulfing more and more Bolaño these last few days, I am sooo in on this, Silvio.

Immense, rapid, absolutely blinding in intensity and wit.

The lead up to the green light comment was one of my favourite moments in all your work I have read.

More please. More.

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Thank you so much, Nathan! There's a ton of Bolaño in this, as you rightly pointed out. I've noticed it seeps into my prose involuntarily, almost like osmosis. Your approval of this new series means a lot, my friend. :)

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

LOL Van, yes! Thank you so much!

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